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- You have written in detail on each of the four questions so far.
- You have started to include some visual material, but this is not supervisual and will need to be developed.
- You have shown some careful thought, especially on representation.
EBI
- You must check youe SPAG, I found quite a few mistakes e.g. Thrillwe Q4 (Thriller) , Imax Q6 (I-mac) Degenregate Q6 (Degenerate? Check this on i-Movie), gift Q6 (gif), cinematory Q5 (cinematography). Check through and correct any others as well. You should also make sure that you use I not i.
- You should include more detail when writing about your target audience, consider also the interests of your audience. Create a profile of your 'ideal' audience member. What do they like to do? What do they buy? How often do they go to the cinema and who with?
- Remember you will need to make all your posts supervisual. Think about how you can do this in creative and interesting ways.
EFFORT - VG (but you need to check SPAG before you post in future)
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